Question

18．假設(shè)你是大慶實驗中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，得知英國學(xué)生Eric 作為交換生，下學(xué)期將到你班學(xué)習(xí)．請你根據(jù)以下提示，給他寫封郵件，表示歡迎．
1．介紹與大慶生活有關(guān)的信息（如地理位置、氣候、市民等）；
2．介紹本班情況；
3．希望Eric做哪些事情，以增進(jìn)中英學(xué)生間的了解和友誼．
注意：1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)100左右；開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：交換生 an exchange student
Dear Eric，
I'm Li Hua，a student of Daqing Shiyan High School．
          ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Daqing，situated in the north of China，is famous for oil．
在介紹地理位置時，使用了situated in…非謂語動詞做狀語；
（高分句型二）When you are here，it'll be great if you introduce your school to us so that we can have a better understanding of British culture．
使用了It 做形式主語的句型，It will be great if you…如果你做…我們會很感謝的；
（高分句型三）You can also join in our after-class activities，which will help you to make more friends．
該句使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which做主語指代前面整個句子．
高級詞匯：be situated in 坐落于；be  considered as 被認(rèn)為是；
Meanwhile表示與此同時；so that 以便；

解答 I'm Li Hua，a student of Daqing Shiyan High School．We are all excited to hear you will study with us as an exchange student．Welcome to our class!I'd like to introduce the city of Daqing and the class to you．
（高分句型一）Daqing，situated in the north of China，is famous for oil．（介紹地理位置氣候）It's cold in winter while it's hot in summer．The people here are very friendly．Meanwhile，（介紹本班學(xué)生情況）our class looks like a family．Teamwork is considered as the class spirit．（高分句型二）When you are here，it'll be great if you introduce your school to us so that we can have a better understanding of British culture．（高分句型三）You can also join in our after-class activities，which will help you to make more friends．
We all look forward to your coming．（表達(dá)對 Eric到來的歡迎）
Yours，
                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文實際上是對考生的思路以及文章的寫作范圍給出了明確的限定，因此考生在寫作時，應(yīng)在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全的同時進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮；要根據(jù)提綱全面構(gòu)思文章內(nèi)容，根據(jù)內(nèi)容構(gòu)思詞語和句型結(jié)構(gòu)；注意句子的時態(tài)，詞語的豐富和句型的多樣性．