【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班學生李華。最近你和同學組織了“文明使用共享單車”的活動，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給�？坝⒄Z角”寫一篇稿件介紹你們的活動過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：1.civilized 文明的

2. leaflets 宣傳單

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【答案】Recently, the increasing popularity of shared bikes has made our lives more convenient. However, my classmates and I often noticed some shared bikes placed messily everywhere. We felt upset and decided to make a change to the uncivilized behavior.

First, we had a heated discussion about the problem at our class meeting. We shared our ideas and came up with a great plan. After making full preparations, we started to take action.

On Saturday morning, we gathered outside the subway station near our school. Firstly, we began with those messy shared bikes there and tried to put them in order. People passing by all appreciated what we did. Seeing the bikes in rows on the pavement, we really felt excited. Then, in order to encourage people’s civilized behavior, we put up a poster saying “PLEASE BE CIVILIZED WHILE USING A SHARED BIKE”. Meanwhile, some of us helped to give out leaflets. Of course, we drew much attention from the passers-by. Hopefully our action would make a difference.

This experience actually inspires me a lot. The idea of sharing requires people’s awareness of civilization. When the uncivilized behavior occurs, it is our duty to do our best to stop it. I strongly believe that in this way our society will become better and better

【解析】這是一篇命題作文。同學們在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：1.由于活動發(fā)生在過去，這篇稿件是為了介紹這項活動，所以通篇的主要時態(tài)為一般過去時。2.題目只給出了兩個提示詞。所以內容上的擴充需要學生根據(jù)圖片詳細介紹活動過程，根據(jù)四幅圖酌情增添內容。在敘述過程中，可以使用適當?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢。3.由于要求寫的是一篇稿件，所以要注意文章的結構層次，寫之前可列出一個提綱，活動原因—活動介紹—活動意義，再動筆寫時大腦就清晰多了

【范文亮點】

1. However, my classmates and I often noticed some shared bikes placed messily everywhere.然而，我和我的同學們經(jīng)常會注意到一些共享單車被到處凌亂地放置。（連接詞however的使用不僅引起了讀者注意，且使得前后句的轉折關系得以自然承接；placed動詞-ed形式作后置定語，修飾bikes）

2. . After making full preparations, we started to take action.在充分做好準備后，我們開始采取行動。（采用了make full preparations、take action可以加分的動詞短語；采用了由after引導的時間狀語從句）

3. Seeing the bikes in rows on the pavement, we really felt excited. Then, in order to encourage people’s civilized behavior, we put up a poster saying “PLEASE BE CIVILIZED WHILE USING A SHARED BIKE”.看到共享單車在人行道上排列整齊，我們很激動。然后為了鼓勵人們的文明行為，我們張貼了一張海報，寫著“請文明使用共享單車”（第一句使用了動詞-ing形式作伴隨狀語，主語we與seeing是邏輯上的主動關系；第二句使用了動詞-ing形式作后置定語，poster與saying是邏輯上的主動關系）

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