Question

假如你是美國(guó)的Mike，你的朋友李華打算到國(guó)外留學(xué)，他寫(xiě)信詢問(wèn)你什么樣的中國(guó)學(xué)生最受?chē)?guó)外高校青睞。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給對(duì)方寫(xiě)一封回信：

1.語(yǔ)言是道硬門(mén)檻; 2.適應(yīng)能力很重要; 3.興趣愛(ài)好被看重; 4.要有社會(huì)責(zé)任感.

注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：適應(yīng) adapt to

Dear Li Hua,

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Yours,

Mike

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.

As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the course. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What’s more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.

This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.

Yours, Mike

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。同時(shí)也屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，寫(xiě)關(guān)于什么樣的中國(guó)學(xué)生最受?chē)?guó)外高校青睞，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.和 those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.這兩句話都是亮點(diǎn)。還要注意用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞：besides，what‘s more，last but not least等。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)短文寫(xiě)作。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。