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【題目】據(jù)報道，2014年江蘇青奧會將選拔萬名以上志愿者為之服務。請你以“Dos and Don’ts for the 2014 Youth Olympic Volunteers”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，討論志愿者應該做什么，不應該做什么。短文應包括下表中的內(nèi)容：

Dos	Don’ts
1、待人禮貌友好	1、避免不恰當?shù)难孕?/span>
2、有責任感	2、不忘履行自己的職責
3、介紹中國和江蘇歷史和傳統(tǒng)文化	3、不損害城市形象
如果我成為志愿者，我會全心全意為運動員服務，使其挑戰(zhàn)極限成為可能，祝愿此次青奧會成功，彰顯其往日的榮光。

注意：1對所給要點，不要簡單翻譯，要有適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。

2詞數(shù)120左右。短文已寫好的部分不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dos and Don’ts for the 2014 Youth Olympic Volunteers

It is reported that more than 10,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2014 Youth Olympic Games in Nanjing，Jiangsu Province. What should the volunteers do and what should they not do?

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Answer 1

【答案】Dos and Don’ts for the 2014 Youth Olympic Volunteers

It is reported that more than 10,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2014 Youth Olympic Games in Nanjing Jiangsu Province. What should the volunteers do and what should they not do?

Firstly, volunteers should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world. Meanwhile, improper words and behavior should be avoided. Secondly, they should have a great sense of responsibility. In other words, they should stick to their posts, offer good service, and always be prepared to help those in difficulty/trouble. At no time should they forget to do/perform their duty. Thirdly, it is a good opportunity/chance for us to introduce the traditional culture and history of Jiangsu and China to foreigners. Last but not least, they should never say or do anything that will harm the image of the city.

【解析】試題分析：本文要求以“Dos and Don’ts for the 2014 Youth Olympic Volunteers”為題，討論江蘇青奧會志愿者應該做什么，不應該做什么。文章應包括Dos和Don’ts。寫作時首先要認真閱讀提示內(nèi)容，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

本文內(nèi)容符合要求，重點突出，語句銜接緊密，文章布局合理，文中使用高級句子。improper words and behavior should be avoided.使用含情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)；always be prepared to help those in difficulty/trouble.介詞短語做后置定語；At no time should they forget to do/perform their duty.否定短語位于句子開頭句子用部分倒裝；do anything that will harm the image of the city.句中使用that引導的定語從句；另外，Firstly, Meanwhile, Secondly, In other words, Last but not least,等的運用為文章增色添彩。