Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你校正在開展“心懷感恩”教育活動。請你結(jié)合個人經(jīng)歷和下列要點，為校報的英語園地寫一篇短文。

1、感動你的人和事。

2、表達感恩和祝福。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100 左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.開頭語已為你寫好。

Looking back on the past years(回首過去的幾年),______________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】(1) Lookingbackonthepastyears,Icouldn’thelpbutthinkofSusan,myEnglishteacher,

whoalwaysencouragedmetogetoveranydifficultyIencounteredinhighschool.

Astheexamwasapproaching,Susanhadatalkwithmewhennoticingmystressand

anxiety.Byanalyzingmytestgradessheasked metobelievemyabilityandrelaxmyself.

Heradvicemademefullof confidenceandcourage.EverytimeIwasdown,Susanwas

alwaysthefirstpersonwhogavemegreatcomfort.

MygratitudetoSusanisbeyondwords.Withoutherassistance,Icannotimaginehow

I canpassthelifeofhighschoolsmoothly.I wish herhappinessandgoodluckinthefuture.

(2) Looking back on the past years, I owe many thanks to many parents.

Blessed with my parents, I’ve been living a happy and worry-free life in the past 16 years. Therefore, I’d like to express my sincerest gratitude to my parents, who have brought me up not only to learn scientific knowledge but also to behave myself. Without their patient teaching and selfless devotion, I couldn’t have been growing up healthily.

Additionally, never shall I forget the time when my parents encouraged me when I was feeling down. Also, I will always cherish the precious time spent with my parents going on vacation, talking about life and discussing my learning problems. I feel deeply grateful to them.

May my parents have long and happy lives.

【解析】本題考查提綱類作文。首先審題，假定你是李華，你校正在開展“心懷感恩”教育活動。請你結(jié)合個人經(jīng)歷和下列要點，為校報的英語園地寫一篇短文。1、感動你的人和事。2、表達感恩和祝福。其次要確定時態(tài)，感動你的人和事，用一般過去時。表達感恩和祝福，用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。在寫作過程中，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合題目所給出的信息，不要出現(xiàn)偏題問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有文采。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些高級句型。例如Icouldn’thelpbutthinkofSusan,my

Englishteacher,whoalwaysencouragedmetogetoveranydifficultyIencounteredinhigh

school. 這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。EverytimeIwasdown,Susanwas

alwaysthefirstpersonwhogavemegreatcomfort.這里含有一個定語從句。Therefore, I’d like to express my sincerest gratitude to my parents, who have brought me up not only to learn scientific knowledge but also to behave myself. 這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。