Question

1．In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．
提示詞：放大鏡magnifying glass．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
But what makes me puzzled is that a magnifying glass is used to see its light scratch on the cup，which is not at all obvious．
高分句型二：
Only in this way can harmony be achieved and conflicts be avoided．
句型一 ①what makes me puzzled 該句是一個由what引導(dǎo)的主語從句，what在從句中作主語②which is not at all obvious．該句是一個由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中充當(dāng)主語，替代前面整個句子的內(nèi)容．
句型二 Only in this way can harmony..該句中使用了部分倒裝句，only位于句首，修飾介詞短語時，從句要使用部分倒裝，即主語同謂語部分的助動詞進(jìn)行位置的交換．

解答 In the picture，there is a cup，which is usually presented to the winners in sports competitions．The cup is definitely a symbol of great success．（描述圖片）But what makes me puzzled is that a magnifying glass is used to see its light scratch on the cup，which is not at all obvious．（高分句型一）
   What I see in this picture reminds me of people who use a magnifying glass to see the faults in others．Those people are usually very demanding and picky．（寓意解析）They only see the"scratches"instead of the whole cup．As we all know，everyone has both strengths and weaknesses．Therefore，we should be objective about others'achievements rather than find faults with them on purpose．Only in this way can harmony be achieved and conflicts be avoided．（高分句型二）

點(diǎn)評 本文是一個圖標(biāo)類書面表達(dá)，寫作時應(yīng)注意觀察圖表所提供的信息，盡量要將其所列內(nèi)容清楚表達(dá)；另外考生平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡介的語言將作文表達(dá)清楚．