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3．假定你是中學(xué)生李華．高三將是辛苦忙碌的一年，不管自己還是父母都會(huì)很辛苦．每個(gè)家長(zhǎng)都是望子成龍的，處在這一重要的階段，父母會(huì)對(duì)你的生活學(xué)習(xí)倍加關(guān)心．現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你按照以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給自己的父母寫(xiě)一封感謝信．（100詞左右）
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．感謝父母這么多年來(lái)無(wú)微不至的關(guān)心；
2．近段時(shí)間自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況及取得的進(jìn)步，自己會(huì)繼續(xù)努力，希望父母放心；
3．高三過(guò)后一定多幫父母做家務(wù)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出．
Dar parents，
                                                           
Love from，
Your son．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇書(shū)信，要求給父母寫(xiě)一封感謝信，文章有幾點(diǎn)要求：1．感謝父母這么多年來(lái)無(wú)微不至的關(guān)心；2．近段時(shí)間自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況及取得的進(jìn)步，自己會(huì)繼續(xù)努力，希望父母放心；3．高三過(guò)后一定多幫父母做家務(wù)．寫(xiě)文章時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：全面覆蓋要點(diǎn)；人稱、稱呼要符合高三學(xué)生的心情和身份；注意不能有語(yǔ)法和時(shí)態(tài)的錯(cuò)誤．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，知識(shí)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如 nothing but，express表達(dá)，try my best to盡力，accomplish my assignment，set your minds，intend to想要，in order to，going well with，words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the care you have shown me over the past years是一句從句，I intend to help you do some housework，which I have seldom done before是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，Do relax!是強(qiáng)調(diào)句．
The hardest time of my life is coming，and I know that you both are very worried about my studies and my life．（高分句型一）
I can say nothing but thanks to you on this special occasion，because words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the care you have shown me over the past years．（高分句型二）
After the college entrance examination，I intend to help you do some housework，which I have seldom done before．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear parents，
      The hardest time of my life is coming，and I know that you both are very worried about my studies and my life．（高分句型一） I can say nothing but thanks to you on this special occasion，because words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the care you have shown me over the past years．（高分句型二）These days I have been studying hard and have performed to the best of my abilities in the test．I'll try my best to accomplish my assignment in the days to come．Please set your minds at rest．
      After the college entrance examination，I intend to help you do some housework，which I have seldom done before．（高分句型三）And I want to learn to cook in order to prepare a dinner personally for you both．
      My dear parents，everything is going well with me．Do relax!
                                                                                                                                                                                               Love from，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Your son

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧