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書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
2010年，中國“虎媽”蔡美兒以其給兩個女兒列出絕對不允許做的“十不準(zhǔn)”在全球一炮走紅。由此而引發(fā)的有關(guān)如何教育子女的爭論愈演愈烈。請就此給China Daily投稿，闡明家長們的不同觀點，并發(fā)表自己的見解。

一些家長的觀點	子女必須沿著父母為其選擇的道路努力…．．． 必要時采用高壓手段…．．．
另一些家長的觀點	孩子應(yīng)該自由發(fā)展…．．． 賞識教育，好孩子是夸出來的…．．．
你的觀點	．．．．．．（至少兩點）

注意：
對所給要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。
詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
Amy Chua, a professor at Yale Law School, who listed ten “Don’ts” to her two daughters became
famous overnight． She insists that parents should be very strict with their children． It has caused a

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Amy Chua, a professor at Yale Law School, who listed ten “Don’ts” to her two daughters became famous overnight． She insists that parents should be very strict with their children． It has caused a heated online debate．
Some parents insist that children should make every effort to live up to their parents’ expectations． They believe it is necessary to be strict with their children． They say parents who set high standards and push their kids to study and make achievements can ensure their children’s success in the future competition．
Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that children should have the right to make their own decisions and develop in their own way． Additionally, praise the children when they do well and encourage them when they are faced with challenges, and they will be great．
In my opinion, those who are raised with the strict Chinese parenting style don’t have the ability to think and act independently． They lack imagination, creativity and social skills． Parents should not put so much pressure on the children． Just give them suggestions and show respect to their own choices so that they will learn to be independent．

解析試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，要求就如何教育子女這個問題，闡明家長們的不同觀點，并發(fā)表自己的見解。需要寫的部分內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需注意：對所給要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可，關(guān)鍵在于要給出自己的觀點。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
考點：話題類作文
點評：本文屬于話題類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。