Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)右邊這幅畫(huà)的理解用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容要求：

1.描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容，如情景，人物，動(dòng)作等。

2.結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/p>

3.舉例說(shuō)明你能在尊老愛(ài)老方面做些什么。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)120左右。

2.參考詞匯：按摩 massage n.﹠v.

Answer 1

Respecting the elders is a good virtue. As is shown in the picture, a granddaughter might have realized that her grandma is tired from doing housework, so she thinks that she should do something about it. So she gives her grandmother a gentle back massage , hoping that it can reduce her grandma’s tiredness.

This reminds me of my parents and grandparents who have been doing whatever they can do to let me have the best education. But, totally absorbed in my own study, I seldom take notice of their tiredness and never offer to do something to make them feel comfortable.

Now I know I can do my bit to help them with everyday cleaning, or at least clean my own bedroom, or massage their feet or legs before bedtime to help them reduce the tiredness. Meanwhile, I will work harder at my lessons. I know my progress is the best reward for their love.

【解析】這是一篇漫畫(huà)寫(xiě)作，主要圍繞漫畫(huà)談?wù)勛鹄蠍?ài)幼，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意需先將漫畫(huà)大致內(nèi)容描述出來(lái)，在談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿１疚牟捎媒?jīng)典三段式寫(xiě)法。第一段描述漫畫(huà)大致內(nèi)容，第二段結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，第三段談做法。第一段第一句Respecting the elders is a good virtue.就采用動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)的句式；第一段第二句As is shown in the picture, a granddaughter might have realized that her grandma is tired from doing housework使用了as領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句；第一段最后一句So she gives her grandmother a gentle back massage , hoping that it can reduce her grandma’s tiredness.使用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)的句型；第二段第一句This reminds me of my parents and grandparents who have been doing whatever they can do to let me have the best education.首先使用了who領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，同時(shí)使用了whatever領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句第二段最后一句totally absorbed in my own study, I seldom take notice of their tiredness and never offer to do something to make them feel comfortable.使用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。在短語(yǔ)使用上，使用了be tired from因..感到疲憊，remind of想到…be absorbed in沉溺于…take notice of注意到，at least至少，等短語(yǔ)。在詞語(yǔ)使用上也十分有亮點(diǎn)，如最后一段最后一句使用了Meanwhile，同時(shí)。本文寫(xiě)作十分有層次感，句式運(yùn)用也十分好。

考點(diǎn)：漫畫(huà)寫(xiě)作總結(jié)：看圖寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意先要描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容，注意文章層次感。