Question

19．假設你是新華中學高三年級學生LiHua．高考臨近，你遇到了一些問題，想寫信給21世紀英文報的編輯，希望得到幫助．問題如下：
1．作業(yè)太多，經(jīng)常熬夜，感到疲憊；
2．不知如何平衡學與玩，感到焦慮；
3．父母只關心考試分數(shù)，很少交流．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右     2．可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫
Dear editor，
                                            
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是關于考試焦慮的問題，對于高三的學生來說，這樣的情況是很普遍的，所以本文有很強的可寫性，考生有話可說，根據(jù)所給要點進行適當?shù)臄U充，以保證行文連貫．寫作的時候要注意使用高級詞匯，和多樣式的句型，讓文章更有層次，更多樣行．寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤．注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫．
   亮點部分 With the college entrance examination approaching，I have some problems to ask you for help．（高分句型）句子有 with的復合結構
  As is often the case，I have to spend at least three to four hours doing my homework every day so that I have to stay up at night，which makes me rather exhausted．（高分句型）as和which引導的非限制性定語從句
What's more，what troubles me most is the fact that my parents only care about marks and seldom communicate with me．（高分句型）帶有主語從句

解答 Dear editor，
I'm LiHua，a senior three student in Daqing Tieren high school．With the college entrance examination approaching，I have some problems to ask you for help．（高分句型）
As is often the case，I have to spend at least three to four hours doing my homework every day so that I have to stay up at night，which makes me rather exhausted．（高分句型）Besides，I don't know how to balance study and play．I am very anxious about it．What's more，what troubles me most is the fact that my parents only care about marks and seldom communicate with me．（高分句型）I'm so puzzled right now and don't know what to do next．I hope I could get some advice from you．
Looking forward to your reply．
Thank you，
Yours，
LiHua

點評 注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多．寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯．