Question

假設你是育才中學學生會主席（Chair of the Student Union）李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽（speech contest），希望附近某大學的外籍教師Smith女士來做評委。請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。

英語演講比賽 主題：人與自然 時間：6月15日下午2：00－5：00 地點：501教室 參賽選手：10名學生 聯(lián)系人：李華（電話44876655） 歡迎大家光臨

         注意：詞數(shù)100左右。

         Dear Ms. Smith,

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                     With best wishes,

                                                                          Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Ms Smith,

         I’m Li Hua. Chair  of  the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which  is close to your University. I’m writing to invite you  to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1^st.  It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches  on  the  given  topic “Man and  the Nature”. We hope you will accept our invitation  if  it  is convenient for you. Please call me at 446765560. if you have any questions.

         I am looking forward to your reply.

                                                                 With best wishes,

                                                                          Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：

本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)，要求讓你給評委寫信，因此本文必須用第一人稱。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。本信涉及的生詞不多，根據(jù)線索和信函要求，學生容易組織材料。適當?shù)难诱箓�別細節(jié)再加上所給的提示，考生注意寫清楚以下幾點：1.主題，2. 時間，3. 地點，4. 參賽選手，5. 恰當?shù)慕Y尾，就能較好的發(fā)揮出來。當然在書寫上，要干凈整潔的卷面與字數(shù)要求，一般能達到較高的分數(shù)。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如writing to，invite you  to，last for, deliver their speeches，accept our invitation，looking forward to；還運用了Chair  of  the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which  is close to your University. which引導的非限制性定語從句; We hope you will accept our invitation  if  it  is convenient for you. if引導的條件狀語從句；Please call me at 446765560.引用了祈使句等等。

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