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近年來，汽車產(chǎn)業(yè)的飛速發(fā)展，汽車購買量猛增已給我們的生活和環(huán)境造成了極大的影響甚至困擾。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文，題目自擬。

1. 描述目前的交通狀況；

2. 人們大量使用汽車所產(chǎn)生的問題；

3. 你的建議或解決辦法（至少兩條）。

要求：

1. 文章要包括以上所有要點，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使文章連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One Possible Version

How to Solve Traffic Jam

In the past years, with the rapid development of car industry, more and more cars have been produced. Many citizens are willing to buy their own cars to enjoy a better life.

It looks good but parking and driving have become a terrible problem. What’s worse it has caused lots of pollution and even contributed to smog. How to solve this problem remains puzzling. My suggestions are as follows.

Firstly, if possible, we can widen streets by changing two-lane streets into four-lane ones and four-lane ones into six-lane ones. Secondly, build more underground parking areas, which can reduce the number of cars on the street. Thirdly, some traffic vehicles, such as motors and trucks should be forbidden to enter the center of the city. Finally, the citizens should be encouraged to get to or from work or go shopping by bus. If we only follow these suggestions, we can lighten the traffic pressure and avoid traffic jam.

【解析】

試題分析：近年來，汽車產(chǎn)業(yè)的飛速發(fā)展，汽車購買量猛增已給我們的生活和環(huán)境造成了極大的影響甚至困擾。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文，題目自擬。1.描述目前的交通狀況；2.人們大量使用汽車所產(chǎn)生的問題；你的建議或解決辦法（至少兩條）。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】What’s worse it has caused lots of pollution and even contributed to smog.運用定語從句；Secondly, build more underground parking areas, which can reduce the number of cars on the street. 運用定語從句；Thirdly, some traffic vehicles, such as motors and trucks should be forbidden to enter the center of the city. 運用被動語態(tài)；If we only follow these suggestions, we can lighten the traffic pressure and avoid traffic jam.

運用if引導(dǎo)的條件句；In the past years, with the rapid development of car industry, more and more cars have been produced. Many citizens are willing to buy their own cars to enjoy a better life.此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。