Question

你是李華，最近看到一則關(guān)于移居（immigrate to）加拿大的廣告。你去信加拿大駐華使館移民處了解具體的信息。要點(diǎn)如下：

如何成為加拿大公民？需要多長時(shí)間才能申請成功？

如果移民成功，能否憑國內(nèi)的高中文憑直接上大學(xué)？如果不行，又有什么要求？

平均學(xué)費(fèi)（tuition）、生活費(fèi)（living expenses）以及獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金信息。

注意：1.詞數(shù)120字左右

2.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a Chinese high school student. I am writing to ask fo more information concerning immigration to Canada.________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear sir and madam，

I am a Chinese high school student. I am writing to ask for more information concerning immigration to Canada. I have read a recent advertisement that asked people to considering immigrating to Canada. I’m very interested in it, but I want some detailed information.

Firstly, I would like to know how one is able to become a Canada citizen, and how soon this could be achieved.

Secondly, as I am going to get the high school diploma in China， I wonder if I can go to university directly in Canada, provided that I get accepted. If not, what qualifications do I need to go to university?

Finally, I would like to know the average tuition and living expenses each year. Could you tell me something about the scholarships the government and universities offer to students.

I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。