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3．假如你是李華．請給你的英國筆友Jack發(fā)一封電子郵件，邀請他五一節(jié)期間到青島旅游，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．介紹青島：歷史文化名城，旅游度假勝地；
2．推薦景點(diǎn)：青島海底世界（豐富的海底動植物，深受青少年喜愛）；
3．提醒事項：穿舒適的鞋子、帶相機(jī)等．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jack，
May 1st is International Labor Day which is observed by all the workers in the world．
．
I hope to receive your early reply and look forward to your coming!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息請給英國筆友Jack發(fā)一封電子郵件，邀請他五一節(jié)期間到青島旅游，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點(diǎn)：介紹青島：歷史文化名城，旅游度假勝地；推薦景點(diǎn)：青島海底世界（豐富的海底動植物，深受青少年喜愛）；提醒事項：穿舒適的鞋子、帶相機(jī)等．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be convenient for sb對某人來說是方便的；As we all know眾所周知；pick you up去接你；be popular with受歡迎
As we all know，Qingdao is a famous tourist destination，which has a long history．（高分句型一）
 If you decide to come，please tell me your arriving time and I will pick you up at the airport．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Jack，
      May 1st is International Labor Day which is observed by all the workers in the world．If it's convenient for you，I sincerely invite you to come to Qingdao for a trip during this holiday．As we all know，Qingdao is a famous tourist destination，which has a long history．（高分句型一）（介紹青島）Among the places of interest here，Qingdao Undersea World is very popular with us teenagers．You will be impressed most by its colorful plants and animals living under the sea and many other amazing scenes．I'm sure you will have a good time together with me as your guide．（推薦景點(diǎn)）
       If you decide to come，please tell me your arriving time and I will pick you up at the airport．（高分句型二）Remember to wear a pair of comfortable shoes and take your camera．（提醒事項）
      I hope to receive your early reply and look forward to your coming!
                                                                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．