Question

假設(shè)你是李明，暑假參加了為期兩周的“美國夏令營”活動(dòng)。期間你住在Smith夫婦家中，他們?yōu)槟闾峁┝顺�、住、行及旅游方面的幫助。�?qǐng)寫一封電子郵件感謝他們。內(nèi)容需要包括以下要點(diǎn)：

      1．已安全回到中國的家；

      2．感謝Smith夫婦的幫助。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．開頭結(jié)尾均已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith，

How time flies!

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Best wishes to you.

                                                      Yours sincerely,

LiMing

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

  Dear Mr. And Mrs. Smith,

  How time flies! My time in the two-week winter camp seemed as if it happened yesterday.

  I have already returned to China safe and sound. When I think of the wonderful two weeks I spent in Australia, I just can’t help thinking of both of you and want to express my gratitude to you. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay such a happy and wonderful experience. I have learned quite a lot, not only of English but also of your culture. And I really enjoyed the fun and laughter we shared with each other. It was your hospitality and great help that made my journey fruitful and worthwhile. I will cherish the merry memories for the rest of my life. I hope we can keep in touch.

  Best wishes to you.

                                                            Yours sincerely,

     LiMing

【解析】

試題分析：本題是常見的書信類作文。首先，注意書信的格式；其次，作文要包含所有的要點(diǎn)，并根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)恼归_；最后，表示感謝的同時(shí)，送上自己美好的祝愿。注意時(shí)態(tài)和語法方面，不能出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了較多的短語和句型，如safe and sound, think of, can’t help doing, It was so kind of you..., not only, but also, keep in touch等，使作文比較充實(shí)。范文還使用了定語從句，如I spent in Australia和we shared with each other；強(qiáng)調(diào)句型It was your hospitality and great help that...的使用，使文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：書信類作文