Question

隨著年齡的增長，我們總想掙脫父母的懷抱，漸漸和父母產(chǎn)生分歧。假設(shè)你是李華，某中學(xué)英語雜志社正在開展題為 “How to get along well with your parents” 的征文活動(dòng)。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇征文稿。
1. 事前要跟父母溝通，征求他們的建議；
2. 跟父母意見不一致時(shí)要保持冷靜；
3. 多花時(shí)間跟父母在一起，跟他們一塊郊游等。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
How to get along well with your parents
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Answer 1

As you are growing, you may want to be free from your parents and feel ready to make your own decisions. However, your parents will disagree with you. Your relationship with your parents may be in trouble right now. Here are some tips for you to avoid quarrels with your parents.
Discuss the rules ahead of time and not at the last minute. This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no to before you make plans.
Try to remain calm when your parents say no to something. You’d better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them.
Spend time with your family. Communicate with each other at home. Suggest activities that your whole family will enjoy together such as going for a hike, a bike ride, or going to the beach.

解析試題分析：
該書面表達(dá)題要求考生就“如何處理好與父母之間的關(guān)系”提出建議。答題時(shí)要注意：使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；以祈使句為主；不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意文章的連貫性和整體性。
考點(diǎn)：書面表達(dá)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】
語言地道。如free from your parents, feel ready to, say yes or no to, listen to what they have to say, 等等。
如果文章最后加上下面的句子，則可與首段呼應(yīng)，顯得整體性更好：Follow these tips, and you will enjoy a good relationship with your parents.