Question

高考是全社會關注的大事, 學校和家庭表現尤為突出。家庭成員對考生從學習到生活給予無微不至的"關懷", 結果卻給考生帶來負面影響。根據圖畫所描述的內容寫一篇文章,并發(fā)表自己的觀點（夾敘夾議）。

Answer 1

As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse. From the picture, we can see that Li Ming is "studying hard". There are many books for him to read and many papers for him to do. How poor he is! At the same time, all his family are also busy working for him.

Nowadays, many parents expect too much of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict with their children. However, they don’t realize what a great pressure they have put on their children. It is the great pressure that often gets their children very anxious.

So I hope parents provide a proper environment for their children. Only in this way, will they try their best and succeed at last.

解析:

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