Question

期末考試后，為了相互溝通，提高學生學習成績，學校將召開家長會。請用英語寫一篇短文談談同學們對開家長會的看法。要點如下：

大部分學生贊同并陳述他們的理由（至少寫兩點）；

2. 少部分同學不贊同并陳述他們的理由；

3. 你的觀點及理由。

要求：1. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)100左右；

3. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

After the final examination, a parents’ meeting will be held in our school.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

After the final examination, a parents’ meeting will be held in our school.. Parents’ meetings are often held to help parents keep in touch with the school and teachers and improve the students’ studies, but different people have different ideas. Here are our views on parents’ meetings.

Most students think it is of great importance to have the meeting for parents to know more about their children at school. What is more, parents can get some good advice and useful/practical information from teachers. On the contrary, a minority of students hold the view that it is useless because they think their parents may punish them after knowing their poor marks and improper behavior at school.

In my opinion, to understand children better, parents should contact teachers, so parents’ meetings are quite necessary.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是同學們對開家長會的看法，題目中給出了大部分要點，就是對贊成和反對的不同觀點，還要考生給出自己的觀點。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是贊同的觀點，然后是反對的觀點，最后是自己的觀點，要求考生用地道的英語表達自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個整體。

【亮點說明】范文觀點明確，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言簡潔，用詞講究，句式多變，舉例如下： keep in touch with保持聯(lián)系，In my opinion, Here are our views on parents’ meetings.這句話使用倒裝句，Most students think it is of great importance to have the meeting for parents to know more about their children at school. 這句話使用了賓語從句和it做形式主語， a minority of students hold the view that it is useless because they think their parents may punish them after knowing their poor marks and improper behavior at school.這句話使用了同位語從句，to understand children better, parents should contact teachers, so parents’ meetings are quite necessary.這句話使用了不定式做目的狀語和結(jié)果狀語從句，還有范文使用了What is more, On the contrary,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。

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