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6．下面是你同學(xué)的一篇英文習(xí)作，請你幫助修改這篇作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改僅限一次．
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Alibaba founder Jack Ma，his company has been valued at more than  221 billion of which Ma owned 6%，is put in the top position among China's wealthiest．But he stays outside the list of the world's 10 rich people．
Fought against a hard life，young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher．Afterwards he started a translation agency in which took him to the US，where he introduced to the Internet．His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang，a co-founder of Yahoo，in a tour of the Great Wall．The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point for all of them，promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with Jerry Yang．

Answer 1

分析 本文介紹了阿里巴巴的創(chuàng)始人馬云，創(chuàng)建公司發(fā)展壯大的過程，并介紹了他與一個(gè)人的相遇改變了他們兩個(gè)人的命運(yùn)．

解答 Alibaba founder Jack Ma，his company has been valued at more than  221 billion of which Ma owned 6%，is put in the top position among China's wealthiest．But he stays outside the list of the world's 10 richpeople．
Fought against a hard life，young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher．Afterwards he started a translation agencyin which took him to the US，where he∧introduced to the Internet．His fate was bound to changebeforehe was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang，a co-founder of Yahoo，in a tour of the Great Wall．The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point forallof them，promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with Jerry Yang．
詳解：
1．his改成whose；考查定語從句，定語從句的先行詞是Jack Ma，這里是指他的公司，所以用關(guān)系代詞whose．
2．owned改成owns；考查時(shí)態(tài)．which Ma owns 6%，是定語從句，本句的敘述是現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以own也要用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，又因?yàn)镸a是第三人稱單數(shù)，所以改成owns．
3．rich噶次richest；考查形容詞．根據(jù)句意"世界最富有的十個(gè)人"，rich的最高級是richest．
4．Fought改成Fighting．考查非謂語，young Ma與動(dòng)詞fight之間是主謂關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做狀語，fought是過去分詞．
5．去掉in；考查介詞，根據(jù)句意"翻譯社帶他去了美國"，take sb to sp是英語的固定搭配，先行詞agency在定語從句中做的是主語，所以用which引導(dǎo)，in是多余的．
6．加was； 考查被動(dòng)語態(tài)．he 與introduce之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系"被介紹"，所以加was．
7．before改成when/after；考查連詞．when是"當(dāng)…的時(shí)候"，after是"在…之后"，根據(jù)句意是在他被任命去帶領(lǐng)美國的游客Jerry Yang之后或者是那個(gè)時(shí)候，他的命運(yùn)就改變了，所以改成when或者after．
8．in改成on；考查介詞，on 表示正在進(jìn)行著的，活動(dòng)著的，on a tour of the Great Wall是在游覽長城．
9．obvious改成obviously；考查副詞，本題是副詞修飾動(dòng)詞prove，obviously是副詞"明顯地"．
10．a(chǎn)ll改成both；考查代詞，根據(jù)句意這里指的是他和Jerry兩個(gè)人，both用于兩者之間，all用于三者以上．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯(cuò)考查涉及面廣，但卻有所側(cè)重．考查點(diǎn)測試頻率最高的是動(dòng)詞，涉及動(dòng)詞考查的有時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、非謂語動(dòng)詞形式、情態(tài)動(dòng)詞和動(dòng)詞的用法等．此外，還考查名詞、介詞、代詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、連詞等，還涉及到句型結(jié)構(gòu)、行文邏輯、固定搭配等．