新年即將來臨，你打算用攢下的零花錢給父母買一件禮物。請以 “A present for my parents”為題寫一篇文章。該文必須包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.你送的禮物：一張健康俱樂部的貴賓卡；

2.你父母親的現(xiàn)狀：父親是教師，工作很辛苦；母親喜歡讀書，但缺乏運動；

3.你送該禮物的原因；

4.該禮物對他們可能產(chǎn)生的影響和帶來的變化。

注意：1. 文章應(yīng)包括以上所有信息；

2. 詞數(shù)；120左右。文章的開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3. 健康俱樂部的貴賓卡a VIP card of a health club

缺乏 lack

A Present for My Parents

The new year is coming and I want to give my parents a present.

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A present for my parents

The new year is coming and I want to give my parents a present.

That is a VIP card of a health club. My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time working with great efforts at school. My mother loves reading and often dives into piles of books. But she seldom does exercise.

As I grow up, they are getting older. Both of them should exercise more but neither is doing enough. With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise.

I want to express my love and thanks to them by giving them the present. I think they will relax in the health club and make more friends. At the same time, I hope they will enjoy better health

【解析】本題是說明文寫作，主要圍繞為父母準備新年禮物，談?wù)勥x擇的理由與影響。本題在寫作時注意要分為三部分，一是禮物，而是理由，三是影響。本文寫作大致也是按照三部分展開。第二段第二句My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time working with great efforts at school使用了非謂語動詞做伴隨狀語；第三段第一句As I grow up, they are getting older.使用了as領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；第三段最后一句With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise.使用了with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作伴隨狀語。本文使用了許多好短語，如：dive into沉浸于，both of兩者都，at the same time同時等較為常用經(jīng)典的短語。本文在詞語運用上十分注重簡練，如第二段第二句Both of them should exercise more but neither is doing enough前句用both指兩人都，后半句用neither指兩者都不，一肯一否形成對應(yīng)，即簡練又對稱，使文章顯得較為有高度�？偨Y(jié)：說明文寫作時最重要就是把握文章的條理性

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