Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧),在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerning. Why are teens getting fatter and fatter?
In my opinion, there are two reasons of the problem.Firstly, because the popularity of TV and computers and students having such much homework to do, they are getting little exercise than before. Secondly, because people’s quality of life has been gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, that might make the kids overweight.
In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spend too much time in front  of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. As the saying go, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits, vegetables, less fast food and junk food. Last but not the least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.

Answer 1

【小題1】concerning-concerned
【小題2】of—for
【小題3】because+of
【小題4】such—so
【小題5】little—less
【小題6】去掉been
【小題7】that—which
【小題8】spend—spending
【小題9】go—goes
【小題10】去掉the

解析試題分析：文章介紹年輕人肥胖的問題，因?yàn)閷?duì)電視電腦的流行，和學(xué)生作業(yè)太多，他們比以前鍛煉時(shí)間少了。
【小題1】年輕人肥胖的問題使父母擔(dān)心。形容詞：“關(guān)心的，擔(dān)心的”，concerned
【小題2】這個(gè)問題有兩個(gè)原因。The reason for“…的原因”。
【小題3】因?yàn)閷?duì)電視電腦的流行，和學(xué)生作業(yè)太多，他們比以前鍛煉時(shí)間少了。Because of后面接名詞或動(dòng)名詞
【小題4】學(xué)生有這么多的作業(yè)要做。So修飾much homework
【小題5】他們比以前鍛煉時(shí)間少了。應(yīng)該用比較級(jí)little—less
【小題6】人們的生活質(zhì)量越來越好。people’s quality of life 和get是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，去掉been
【小題7】人們的生活質(zhì)量越來越好，家人能買得起很多食物，這可能是使得孩子超重。這是非限制性定語從句，不能用that，用which引導(dǎo)
【小題8】為了減肥，年輕人應(yīng)該減少在電視機(jī)前面的時(shí)間。Avoid 后面接動(dòng)名詞：spend—spending
【小題9】考查主謂一致：主語是the saying，謂語是單數(shù)：go—goes
【小題10】Last but not least,是固定詞組“最后但是同樣重要的是：去掉the
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