Question

7．A healthy diet
學(xué)校下周進(jìn)行健康飲食宣傳教育講座．請(qǐng)你代表班級(jí)為這次活動(dòng)提供一些關(guān)于健康飲食的建議．至少寫(xiě)出3條建議，以下建議可供 參考：
參考建議：1．健康的飲食應(yīng)該是均衡的 （balanced，sugar，fat）
2．一頓好飯應(yīng)該包含提供能量的，長(zhǎng)身體的，保護(hù)作用的食物；（meal，energy-giving，body-building）
3．偏胖的人多吃含有纖維素的食物；（fat，fiber，contain）
4．少吃垃圾食品，多吃水果、蔬菜．
【詞數(shù)】100-120之間．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于健康飲食的原因作文，首先提到健康飲食的重要性，其次介紹什么是健康飲食，最后提出合理化的建議．（1）認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁．本文是議論文． （2）構(gòu)思要點(diǎn)．根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)．設(shè)計(jì)好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)等，把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，構(gòu)成文章框架．（3）選詞造句，避難選易．（4）認(rèn)真檢查，避免錯(cuò)誤．仔細(xì)閱讀全文，查找是否有錯(cuò)，注意時(shí)態(tài)、單詞拼寫(xiě)、字母大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致．
Secondly，it helps us to be energetic enough to study and work hard．（高級(jí)句型）
In order to have a healthy diet，we should first have a reasonable and balanced diet which consists of enough green vegetables and fruit，and for the food high in fat，sugar and salt，we should eat as little as possible because it does great harm to our health．（高級(jí)句型）
What's more，a cheerful state of mind and proper physical exercise are equally as important to our health as healthy diet．（高級(jí)句型）

解答 Healthy Diet
　　 Healthy diet is very important for us．Firstly，it helps us to keep fit and have a proper weight．Secondly，it helps us to be energetic enough to study and work hard．（高級(jí)句型）Finally，it helps to improve the quality of our life．（健康飲食的重要性）
　　 In order to have a healthy diet，we should first have a reasonable and balanced diet which consists of enough green vegetables and fruit，and for the food high in fat，sugar and salt，we should eat as little as possible because it does great harm to our health．（高級(jí)句型） A balanced meal includes energy-giving and body-building food，which is necessary to our body．Besides，a fat person should eat food containing less fat and enough fiber and eat less junk food．What's more，a cheerful state of mind and proper physical exercise are equally as important to our health as healthy diet．（高級(jí)句型）（什么是健康飲食及建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作的文章較開(kāi)放式的文體，比較好寫(xiě)．學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，首先思路要清晰，要對(duì)所表達(dá)的句子通順的說(shuō)出來(lái)，遇到不會(huì)的要學(xué)會(huì)替換所用語(yǔ)，來(lái)達(dá)到同樣的意思．在每一篇作文中，對(duì)于表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的句子，都要用上起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的層次感，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用俗語(yǔ)，運(yùn)用平時(shí)常用的句式來(lái)使文章富有變化，表達(dá)地道得體．