【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

A month ago, we have had our last sports meeting in the middle school, which meant a lot to us. It was not only a great chance to show our talents in sports, but valuable moment for us all to stand together and fight against our joint honor for the last time. We spend most of our spare time practice on the playground, repeating the simple movements again and again. The most impressed moment finally came. Every one of them stood straight and passed the platform full of energy and enthusiastic. It seemed as if we were on a great stage.

It is said that you will receive that you give. In the end our class got the first place with hard training. The sports meeting has been over but our hearts have got close.

【答案】1. 去掉have had中have

2. valuable moment前加a

3. against→for

4. spend→spent

5. practice→practicing

6. impressed→impressive

7. them→us

8. enthusiastic→enthusiasm

9. 第二個that→what

10. close→closer

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。作者敘述了關(guān)于校運會對他們的重大意義以及他們通過努力訓練獲得了第一名。

1.考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)時間A month ago可知時態(tài)為一般過去時，謂語動詞要用過去式。故將have had中have去掉。

2. 考查冠詞。分析句子可知，moment為可數(shù)名詞，表示泛指，且valuable首字母的發(fā)音為輔音音素，可知此處應該用冠詞a修飾名詞moment。故在valuable moment前加a。

3. 考查固定搭配。固定短語fight against意為“對抗，反對，與……作斗爭”，fight for意為“為…而戰(zhàn)”，根據(jù)to stand together and可知應該是“為…而戰(zhàn)”。故將against改為for。

4. 考查時態(tài)。時態(tài)是一般過去時，謂語動詞應用動詞過去式。故將spend改為spent。

5. 考查固定搭配。固定用法spend time (in)doing sth.“花費時間做某事”。故將practice改為practicing。

6. 考查形容詞。形容詞impressive意為“感人的，令人印象深刻的”，此處要用形容詞修飾名詞moment。故將impressed改為impressive。

7. 考查代詞。根據(jù)上文We spent most of our spare time practicing on the playground可知主語是we，故此處Every one of them應該與前文主語一致。故將them改為us。

8. 考查名詞。根據(jù)full of energy and可知此處應該用名詞。故將enthusiastic改為enthusiasm。

9. 考查賓語從句關(guān)系詞。分析句子成分可知，主語為you，謂語為 will receive，后是賓語從句what you give，且what 做give的賓語。故將that改為what。

10. 考查形容詞比較級。此處表示運動會雖然結(jié)束了但是我們的心更靠近了，故應該用形容詞比較級。故將close改為closer。

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