Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述國(guó)慶節(jié)當(dāng)天你和父母幫助迷路的和平鴿找到主人的過(guò)程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：周年紀(jì)念日 anniversary

陽(yáng)臺(tái) balcony

信鴿協(xié)會(huì) Pigeon Association

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Answer 1

【答案】I had a really exciting National Day this week.

On that day, like hundreds of millions of families, my parents and I watched the National Day parade on TV excitedly and proudly till the very end of the ceremony, when thousands of pigeons and balloons were released and flew to the sky.

The pictures of the ceremony were flashing through my mind when suddenly I spotted a pigeon on the balcony. It was a beautiful white pigeon, resting on our balcony and refusing to fly away. Around its feet was a ring which read “the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China”. I couldn’t believe my eyes! This was a National Day pigeon! Realizing that it must have lost its way back home, I managed to find the telephone number of Beijing Pigeon Association and called up for help. In the meanwhile, my parents brought the pigeon inside and gave it some water and bird food.

Before long, the owner got the message and came to take the pigeon back. He thanked us a lot and we all felt honoured that we could do something for the unforgettable National Day!

【解析】

這是一篇看圖作文，要求考生根據(jù)圖片，記述國(guó)慶節(jié)當(dāng)天與父母幫助迷路的和平鴿找到主人的過(guò)程。

第一步：審題

體裁：記敘文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

寫作內(nèi)容：結(jié)合圖片，描述國(guó)慶節(jié)看閱兵以及與父母一起幫助迷路的和平鴿找到主人的過(guò)程。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

the National Day parade; flew to the sky; rest on; must have done; in the meanwhile; feel honoured

第三步：連詞成句

1. On that day, like hundreds of millions of families, my parents and I watched the National Day parade on TV excitedly and proudly till the very end of the ceremony, when thousands of pigeons and balloons were released and flew to the sky.

2. Our home is next to the city center, where easy shopping access and convenient transportation are available.

3. The pictures of the ceremony were flashing through my mind when suddenly I spotted a pigeon on the balcony.

4. It was a beautiful white pigeon, resting on our balcony and refusing to fly away.

5. Realizing that it must have lost its way back home, I managed to find the telephone number of Beijing Pigeon Association and called up for help.

6. In the meanwhile, my parents brought the pigeon inside and gave it some water and bird food.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改