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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you something about the changes in my school.

You are right. Great changes have taken place in my school. It is not longer what it used to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new buildings had built and are in use. One of them is a new classroom building, in it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where we can read different kind of books, newspapers and magazines. Besides, my school is good equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. A number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What’s more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

I believe my school will become better and better, but I hope you will visit my school again.

Answer 1

【答案】1. written—writing

2. not—to

3. were---was

4. had∧been built

5. it---which

6. kind—kinds

7. good—well

8. A---The

9. had—have

10. but—and/ so

【解析】1、考查動詞。write是謂語動詞與主語I是主動關(guān)系，由am推斷用writing。故將written改為writing。

2、考查形容詞。句意：它不再是三年前過去的樣子。no longer“不再”是固定短語。故將not改為no。

3、考查主謂一致。therebe句型中，謂語動詞與其后的名詞保持人稱和數(shù)的一致。由only one teaching building可推斷，謂語動詞用單數(shù)。故將were改為was。

4、考查被動語態(tài)。主語two new building與謂語動詞build是被動關(guān)系，用被動語態(tài)，現(xiàn)在完成時的被動語態(tài)構(gòu)成形式是：had+been+過去分詞。故在had后加been。

5、考查定語從句�！�in which there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching”是定語從句，現(xiàn)行詞是a new classroom building，從句中作介詞賓語，指物，用關(guān)系代詞which。故將it改為which。

6、考查名詞。differentkindsof“不同種類的”是固定搭配，所以kind應是復數(shù)。故將kind改為kinds。

7、考查副詞。well修飾謂語is equipped with作狀語，作狀語用副詞。故將good改為well。

8. 考查冠詞。句意：學生的數(shù)量已經(jīng)從1500增長到2500。the number of…“……的數(shù)量”；a number of…“許多”。根據(jù)句意，故將A改為The。

9. 考查動詞。句意：并且，我們在學校里和學校周圍種植了許多樹。根據(jù)語境可知，此處講述過去發(fā)生的事情對現(xiàn)在造成的影響和結(jié)果，用現(xiàn)在完成時。故將had改為have。

10. 考查連詞。句意：我相信我的學校會變得越來越好，我希望你將會在來我們學校參觀。前后文是順承關(guān)系。故將but改為and。