Question

假定你是李明，你的澳大利亞朋友Steven向你詢問如何才能學(xué)好中文。請你根據(jù)下列要點給他寫封建議信。

要點：1.參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； 2．看中文電視、書刊；

3．學(xué)唱中文歌； 4．交中國朋友。

注意：詞數(shù)120左右；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Steven，

I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice

Best wishes

Yours，

Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Steven,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Here are some suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it is also helpful to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so, you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write to me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes.

Yours，

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱式作文。寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

【亮點說明】：本文要點全部列入，寫作要求達(dá)到。在列舉建議時，本文恰當(dāng)?shù)剡x用連接詞，如：first、then、besides等，使得文章更具連貫性。使用it作形式主語的句型如it is also helpful to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.使文章簡潔明了，更具說服力。

考點：考查提綱式作文