Question

【題目】假定你是李華，九月末將去紐約交流學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)夭┪镳^要舉辦中國傳統(tǒng)服裝展，正在招募志愿者。請寫一封申請信，內(nèi)容包括:

1.寫信目的；2.個人特長；3.期待回復(fù)。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir，

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir，

I’m a middle school student from China and I’m going to study in New York in late September. Knowing that an exhibition of traditional Chinese clothing is to be held in a local museum, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer to help around.

First, I’m interested in clothing design and I’ve read lots of books on the costume features of different dynasties. Besides, being a fluent English speaker, I can help introduce the styles and history to the visitors. Most importantly, it would be an honor to spread our culture and promote cultural exchange between the two countries.

I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封申請信。應(yīng)聘紐約當(dāng)?shù)夭┪镳^的志愿者。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分

要求：1.寫信目的；2.個人特長；3.期待回復(fù)。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

traditional Chinese clothing；local museum；apply to；volunteer ；clothing design；costume features；an honor；look forward to等。

第三步：連詞成句

Knowing that an exhibition of traditional Chinese clothing is to be held in a local museum, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer to help around.

I’m interested in clothing design and I’ve read lots of books on the costume features of different dynasties.

I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application.

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序清晰：First, …. Besides, …. Most importantly,….

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。