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14．假如你是李華，近年來(lái)很多大城市交通擁堵嚴(yán)重，影響了人們的生活和經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展．請(qǐng)針對(duì)此現(xiàn)狀用英語(yǔ)給某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社寫(xiě)封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear editor，
I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic．Nowadays，people in many big cities are complainingabout he heavy traffic．It has seriously influenced people's daily life and economic development．Tosolve the problem，I'd like to put forward some pieces of advice．
For one thing，more streets and roads should be built．In this way，we can speed up the flow of busesand cars．For another，the number ofbikes and cars can be limited，which can decrease the traffic flow．But the most important thing is that the number of private cars should be put under control．Meanwhile，buses should have their own special routes which can't be used by other vehicles．Besides，undergroundtrain and city train should be developed quickly．
I do hope my suggestions will be taken．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇書(shū)信類作文，要求給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，主要要求有：1．交通現(xiàn)狀及影響；2．提出改進(jìn)建議；3．希望建議被采納．需要注意的有：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（高分句型一）the number of bikes and cars can be limited，which can decrease the traffic flow．
首先該句使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which指代整個(gè)事情；
（高分句型二）But the most important thing is that the number of private cars should be put under control．
該句式使用that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)產(chǎn)品能根據(jù)，在從句中should be put是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)．
高級(jí)詞匯：complain about 抱怨；influence影響； put forward 提出；speed up 加速；put under control控制；

解答 Dear editor，
       I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic．（我的看法） Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about he heavy traffic．It has seriously influenced people's daily life and economic development．To solve the problem，I'd like to put forward some pieces of advice．
   （列舉我的建議） For one thing，more streets and roads should be built．In this way，we can speed up the flow of busesand cars．（第二條建議）For another，（高分句型一）the number of bikes and cars can be limited，which can decrease the traffic flow．（高分句型二）But the most important thing is that the number of private cars should be put under control．Meanwhile，buses should have their own special routes which can't be used by other vehicles．Besides，underground train and city train should be developed quickly．
       I do hope my suggestions will be taken．
                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文用了書(shū)信應(yīng)該用的格式，用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，將來(lái)時(shí)等的時(shí)態(tài)穿插．用了For one thing和For another等時(shí)間詞匯，條理清楚的寫(xiě)出了各種要點(diǎn)，并且自己也寫(xiě)出了觀點(diǎn)．