Question

14．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)高一新生李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Peter來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的近況，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
  1．你對(duì)高中生活的感受及打算；
  2．簡(jiǎn)要介紹一位你在新學(xué)校認(rèn)識(shí)的新朋友；
  3．談?wù)勀銓?duì)朋友或友誼的理解．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
      2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
   I'm writing to tell you something about my new school life．At first，I find it a little difficult to get used to the senior school life．The subjects we are learning are obvio usly more difficult．Besides，with endless homework to do，we almost have no time for exercise and other activities．I feel greatly stressed but I'm determined to go through all the difficulties and learn every subject well．（高分句型一）（感受及打算）
Fortunately，the teachers and classmates are all helpful and kind．And I'm glad to make a new friend-Wang Lin，who is very outgoing and always ready to help others．（高分句型二）（認(rèn)識(shí)的新朋友）It was with his help that I overcame my fear or maths and made great progress．（高分句型三）I thinks friends should always help and encourage each other．（對(duì)朋友或友誼的理解）
How about your school life？I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封回信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：你對(duì)高中生活的感受及打算；簡(jiǎn)要介紹一位你在新學(xué)校認(rèn)識(shí)的新朋友；談?wù)勀銓?duì)朋友或友誼的理解．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞，如At first首先；Besides另外；  Fortunately幸運(yùn)的是；   一些固定短語(yǔ)，如get used to 習(xí)慣于；make progress取得進(jìn)步；look forward to盼望
I feel greatly stressed but I'm determined to go through all the difficulties and learn every subject well．（高分句型一）
And I'm glad to make a new friend-Wang Lin，who is very outgoing and always ready to help others．（高分句型二）
It was with his help that I overcame my fear or maths and made great progress．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm writing to tell you something about my new school life．At first，I find it a little difficult to get used to the senior school life．The subjects we are learning are obvio usly more difficult．Besides，with endless homework to do，we almost have no time for exercise and other activities．I feel greatly stressed but I'm determined to go through all the difficulties and learn every subject well．（高分句型一）（感受及打算）
      Fortunately，the teachers and classmates are all helpful and kind．And I'm glad to make a new friend-Wang Lin，who is very outgoing and always ready to help others．（高分句型二）（認(rèn)識(shí)的新朋友）It was with his help that I overcame my fear or maths and made great progress．（高分句型三）I thinks friends should always help and encourage each other．（對(duì)朋友或友誼的理解）
      How about your school life？I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．