Question

請(qǐng)以Madame Curie為題，寫一篇100個(gè)單詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。要點(diǎn)如下：

1. Madame Curie 是世界著名的女科學(xué)家，1867年出生于波蘭（Poland）一個(gè)教師家庭，卒于1934年。

2. 她從小愛(ài)學(xué)習(xí)并希望成為科學(xué)家，16歲中學(xué)畢業(yè)，24歲赴巴黎就讀于巴黎大學(xué)，生活簡(jiǎn)樸（live a simple life），學(xué)習(xí)刻苦.

3. 她一生致力于(devote…to)科學(xué)研究，于1903年和1911年兩次分別獲諾貝爾物理獎(jiǎng)（Nobel Prize for Physics）和諾貝爾化學(xué)獎(jiǎng)。

4. 一個(gè)女人事業(yè)成功不容易，而一生中兩次獲諾貝爾獎(jiǎng)更為困難，居里夫人將作為一位偉大的女性永遠(yuǎn)為人們所懷念（be remembered as）.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Madame Curie was a world famous woman scientist. She was born in a teacher's family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.

From her early childhood, she loved to study and hoped to become a scientist. She finished middle school at the age of 16. At 24 she left for Paris and entered Paris University. She lived a very simple life and studied very hard.

Madame Curie devoted her whole life to the study of science. She won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1903 and for Chemistry in 1911.

It is not easy for a woman to succeed in her work. It is even more difficult for a woman to win the Nobel Prize twice. So Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文的特點(diǎn)是詞組較多： 如：at the age of 16. A， lived a very simple life

 devoted her whole life to ，won the Nobel Prize for Physics，句型上使用了地道的英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言： It is not easy for a woman to succeed in her work It is even more difficult for a woman to win the Nobel Prize twice. 這兩句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ).So Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman.

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱式寫作