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【題目】A set of textbook designed to help high school student learn about Chinese traditional culture is to be published soon, Beijing Times reported on Monday.

The books are the first national-level works of their kind and have been developed by a working group that promotes traditional culture. They will be used by students from autumn this year, the report said.

The set contains four classics from ancient times. Two of the works, The Confucian Analects and Mencius, are for 10th-grade students, while the other two, Great Learning and Dao De Jing, will be used by 11th graders.

The initiative follows a series of steps the authorities have taken in recent years to spread and promote traditional Chinese culture on campus.

Last April, the Ministry of Education released a series of guidelines requiring the inclusion of more information about traditional culture in primary and middle school textbooks, especially those used for subjects such as Chinese Language, history, art and physical education.

The guidelines said students’ knowledge of traditional culture will be tested in the senior high school entrance examination and the gaokao, the college entrance exam.

【寫作內(nèi)容】1 用約30個單詞寫出上文的概要

2 用約120個單詞就“高中生學國學”這一主題發(fā)表你的觀點，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）國學入高中的緣由

（2）你對這一舉動的看法

【寫作要求】1 闡述觀點或提供論據(jù)時，不能直接引用原文語句

2 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學校名稱

3 不必寫標題

【評分標準】 內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。

Answer 1

【答案】

From this autumn, new schoolbooks highlighting the traditional Chinese culture will be used by senior students, whose knowledge of the country’s ancient traditions will also be tested in the gaokao.

There’re several factors accounting for the move. The set of books are the significant component of traditional Chinese culture and provide teenagers with internal codes of conduct and thus they will play a positive role in their process of growth. Besides, the basic education system hasn’t attached enough importance to the learning of traditional culture for quite a long time, and the textbooks are a beneficial effort to reverse that situation. In addition, learning traditional culture is not solely about reciting texts — it’s about utilizing ancient wisdom to solve current problems.

Personally, I strongly support and welcome the move in that it is an initiative to bring Chinese traditional culture back. However, considering individual differences between students, I am not in complete agreement with the practice that they will be tested in the gaokao.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作，本文提供了一段文字，要求學生先用30個詞左右總結這段文字，考查學生的總結能力，注意不能照抄原文。接著，要求對上述文字中的現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的看法，主要包括兩點：（1）國學入高中的緣由，（2）你對這一舉動的看法，這又恢復到了比較傳統(tǒng)的作文模式套路。注意在寫作過程中運用高級詞匯和句式。

【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語：highlight強調，accounting for，component of，play a positive role in，attached enough importance to，a beneficial effort to，reverse，utilize利用，an initiative to主動作為，in complete agreement with，并且有很多值得借鑒和學習的句型：whose knowledge of the country’s ancient traditions will also be tested in the gaokao.定語從句， thus they will play a positive role in their process of growth.原因狀語從句。同時，使用了Besides，In addition等連接詞使得文章條理更加清晰。