Question

 以Nature為題寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 簡(jiǎn)述人類(lèi)對(duì)大自然的依賴(lài)。

2. 隨著人類(lèi)的發(fā)展，生態(tài)平衡遭到破壞，人類(lèi)生存的環(huán)境受到嚴(yán)重污染。人類(lèi)正在受到大自然的懲罰。

3. 我們要善待自然，自然也會(huì)關(guān)照我們。

注意：內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)增減，但不可逐字翻譯。

Nature

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Nature is the mother of mankind. We get almost everything from her. We live on natural food. We make clothes from natural materials. And we build our houses of stone and wood. However，with the development of human beings，man has destroyed the balance of nature. Water，air and soil have been badly polluted. Some kinds of animals and plants have died out completely. As a result，man is being punished by nature. Many people suffer a lot from all kinds of diseases caused by pollution. We should treat nature well and she will look after us.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱式的作文，討論關(guān)于Nature的問(wèn)題。要點(diǎn)是以提綱形式列出，提示里都已經(jīng)給了出來(lái)，考生只需要翻譯即可，注意用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)。適當(dāng)運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和句型，時(shí)態(tài)以現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，也有現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和將來(lái)時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，還要注意句與句的聯(lián)系。如范文的句子with the development of human beings，man has destroyed the balance of nature.這句話里的with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)用的很好。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)短文寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)短寫(xiě)作，此類(lèi)短文寫(xiě)作要求包括提綱中所給的所有要點(diǎn)，不能有遺漏。使用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)連接成流暢合理的短文，變化使用高級(jí)句式讓文章的檔次更高。