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【題目】書面表達

目前，學校存在少數(shù)學生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬就此現(xiàn)象向中學生征文。標題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。內(nèi)容要點如下：

主要原因	考試偏多，偏難
	不用功，懶惰
	取悅父母、老師
個人看法	作弊不對，違反校規(guī)
	要誠實，努力學習
	……（其他看法）

注意： 1.短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要求，可適當發(fā)揮。

2. 短文標題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總字數(shù)。

3.字數(shù)100左右。

4. 參考詞匯：作弊 cheat（v） 勤奮的diligent 懲罰punish

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

At present, some students have picked up a bad habit--cheating in examination.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My opinion on Cheating in Examinations

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit—cheating in examinations.

There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many examinations, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not diligent and they don’t work hard at their lessons. More time is wasted playing games or surfing the Internet. Therefore, they haven’t enough time to prepare for the exams. Third, students have to do so to satisfy their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, cheating in exams should be forbidden because it not only goes against the school rules but also does great harm to students. “No pains, no gains.” We students are supposed to be honest and hardworking. Only in this way, can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer fewer examinations and punish those who cheat in the examinations.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達根據(jù)提示屬于議論文。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照方位順序進行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，采用了總分總的結構。開頭段陳述自己的觀點，第二、三段分析原因并表明自己的觀點。結構清晰：First,Second,Third, In my opinion貫穿全文。此外，本文亮點鮮明，some of which非限制性定語從句，cheating in exams should be forbidden because it not only goes against the school rules but also does great harm to students動名詞作主語，以及諺語的使用 “No pains, no gains.” 。