Question

假如你是李華，曾經(jīng)在美國(guó)留學(xué)三年，今年回國(guó)。你在Tutor.com網(wǎng)站上看到一則廣告——現(xiàn)住北京的美國(guó)Smith夫婦想給他們的兩個(gè)孩子找一個(gè)漢語家教。你很感興趣，隨即向Smith夫婦寫一封正式英文書信。信的內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：

Location	北京
Name	李華
Email	lh137@hotmail.com
Strengths	● 母語是中文，可以說流利的英語 ● 有家教的經(jīng)驗(yàn) ● 熱心、誠(chéng)實(shí)、細(xì)心……
Questions	● 工作時(shí)間 ● 報(bào)酬

注意：1. 文章應(yīng)包括表格里的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Strengths（強(qiáng)項(xiàng)）

2. 信件的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 詞數(shù)：100左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

I am writing to apply for the job as a tutor, which I saw advertised on the Tutor.com last week. I would be interested in teaching the children Chinese.

I am a native Chinese speaker and I can speak fluent English, because I studied in American for about three years. Due to my language skills, I would have no difficulty in communicating with your children, which is good for teaching. When I was in America, I took a job as a tutor in my spare time, so I know how to help solve the problems in Chinese learning.

I feel that I can get on well with your children since I am always kind to my students. Besides, I am patient with students though sometimes strict with them.

I think I would be the right person you want. But I would like to know how long I shall work and what the payment is. Please contact me. My email is lh137@hotmail.com

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文，本文本句簡(jiǎn)單，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，在寫作的時(shí)候注意使用高級(jí)的詞匯如fluent等，也可以多使用合適的連接詞what’s more, besides等，讓文章上下文更加流暢，更像是一個(gè)整體。同時(shí)要變換使用高級(jí)句型，以提升文章的層次和檔次。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類作文要寫出特色是很不容易的，一定要包括全部要點(diǎn)。同時(shí)變換使用多種句式，讓文章賓語那么的平淡，增加文章的特色。