Question

下面這幅圖片反映了一位學(xué)生從因特網(wǎng)上下載音樂(lè)的情景。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)對(duì)這幅圖片的理解用英語(yǔ)為某英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

 

 

你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：

1．描述圖片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動(dòng)作，等等。

2．簡(jiǎn)要分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因。

3．結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)音樂(lè)知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)的看法。

注意：

1．可參照?qǐng)D中文字及下面文章開(kāi)頭所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象。

2．詞數(shù)150左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3．作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

To many people, music has always been part of life, and they listen to music on the radio, on TV, on iPad and on the Internet.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

As is vividly shown in the picture, the music fan is trying to download songs he enjoys, but every time he wants to download something, the website requires payment first, which annoyed him. How he wishes that the music were all free!

Many people download free online music regularly without even realizing they have done harm to others’ right. When we can no longer download for free, we will naturally become dissatisfied. However, as the intellectual property law has come into effect, websites are forbidden to provide free music download, which is certain to benefit the whole society in the long term.

From my point of view, we should pay to download music. The artists work very hard to compose music. If they don’t get paid, they will feel there is very little value in their work. In this case, many composers will lose passion to go ahead and gradually we will find beautiful music no where.

【解析】

試題分析：

圖畫(huà)作文是較難的題型之一，因此考生應(yīng)該特別認(rèn)真地對(duì)待。這類(lèi)題一般要求考生仔細(xì)看圖，根據(jù)題目要求寫(xiě)成自己的作文。實(shí)際上，圖畫(huà)作文也可以當(dāng)作三段式的提綱作文來(lái)寫(xiě)。首先來(lái)描述圖畫(huà)并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句話來(lái)概括就可以)，其次分析原因，最后發(fā)表評(píng)論或提出建議，面對(duì)此類(lèi)題型，考生應(yīng)首先確定主題，然后再動(dòng)筆。尤其要注意圖畫(huà)中人或物(人與物)的體貌表情特征和背景，確定人物之間，人物與背景之間的主要關(guān)系，以便正確掌握?qǐng)D畫(huà)所傳達(dá)的信息。考生應(yīng)該展開(kāi)合理而豐富的聯(lián)想，用生動(dòng)恰當(dāng)?shù)难赞o抒發(fā)自己對(duì)圖畫(huà)的所思、所想、所感。注意圖畫(huà)作文中的文字說(shuō)明。文字說(shuō)明非常重要，通常十分清楚地提供一些寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，考生在看說(shuō)明時(shí)要看清主、謂、賓，正確理解說(shuō)明的意義。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如As is vividly shown in the picture, as the intellectual property law has come into effect,還運(yùn)用了It is adj to do sth; which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：However，F(xiàn)rom my point of view 等等。

考點(diǎn)：圖畫(huà)類(lèi)作文。