Question

書面表達（滿分25分）

前不久，我縣教育部門針對部分學(xué)生沉迷于網(wǎng)吧的現(xiàn)狀，向全體中小學(xué)生發(fā)出了“遠離網(wǎng)吧（Be away from the Internet Bars）”的倡議。倡議書中列舉了一些危害現(xiàn)象，請你結(jié)合這些要點寫一篇100詞左右的短文，對一位沉迷于網(wǎng)吧的同學(xué)進行勸告。題目和開頭部分已給出。

要點：

1、上網(wǎng)(get on-line)浪費時間和金錢，并影響 (affect) 學(xué)習(xí)；

2、網(wǎng)上有一些不健康的東西；

3、長時間上網(wǎng)對眼睛有害；

4、遠離網(wǎng)吧是青少年的正確選擇(the best choice)

Be away from the Internet Bars

Dear friend,

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Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Dear friend,

I’m sorry to hear that you are too much interested in the Internet bars. That’s not right, although it can help us a lot in learning. But getting on-line is a waste of time and money and also affects your studies. It also does harm to your eyes and health. At the same time, it may harm you because there is something bad for the students. “Be away from Internet Bars” is the best choice for us young boys and girls of the new century. Don’t get on-line. Let’s stay away from Internet bars.

【解析】

試題分析：英語寫作是一種創(chuàng)作性的學(xué)習(xí)過程。啟動知識信息儲存，構(gòu)思立意，謀篇布局，遣詞造句，對語言表達的正確性和準確性、思維的邏輯性和文章的條理性都比口語要求更高。先審題，弄清寫作要求，審題是寫好作文的前提，理清思路，確定體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容。提醒考生注意時態(tài)及語態(tài)的使用。

考點：提綱作文。

點評：加強積累適量的詞匯、詞組和增加各種類型句子的運用。把握好各種句型和詞匯的搭配，并從各類題材和體裁著手，思考內(nèi)容的連貫性，語言和句子的準確性。會使用連接詞或過渡句使句子的連接起來，讀起來流暢。