Question

1．你校正在開(kāi)展創(chuàng)建和諧校園系列活動(dòng)，其中包括"做文明學(xué)生，創(chuàng)和諧校園"英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備一篇演講稿，參加該活動(dòng)．
1．文明行為使校園和諧，也是學(xué)生高素質(zhì)的體現(xiàn)
2．文明行為：講禮貌，有愛(ài)心；
維護(hù)校園環(huán)境，愛(ài)護(hù)一草一木；
勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，遵守校規(guī)
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注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于80； 
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)與結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
4．參考詞匯；
文明行為civilized behaviors    和諧harmony （n．）
Good afternoon，teachers and students．I feel honored to make a speech here．The title is"Be a Civilized Student，Construct a Harmonious School"．
                                                                        
                                                                        
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫(xiě)一篇"做文明學(xué)生，創(chuàng)和諧校園"英語(yǔ)演講比賽的演講稿，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：文明行為使校園和諧，也是學(xué)生高素質(zhì)的體現(xiàn)；文明行為：講禮貌，有愛(ài)心；維護(hù)校園環(huán)境，愛(ài)護(hù)一草一木；勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，遵守校規(guī)；我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為演講開(kāi)頭．第二部分為文明行為帶來(lái)的益處．第三部分為文明行為的具體表現(xiàn)．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
make a speech 發(fā)表演講…
be of great importance重要
make up 組成
高分句型一：Not only do they show our good qualities，but also they can make ourselves enjoy the harmony of school life，in which we can gain a better result of study．．此句用了not only 置句首，部分倒裝以及介詞加關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句
高分句型二：The first important thing that  we should do is to be a student with good scores and a student always ready to help people in need此句用了that 引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Good afternoon，teachers and students．I feel honored to make a speech here．The title is"Be a Civilized Student，Construct a Harmonious School"．（演講開(kāi)頭）
As everybody knows，civilized behaviours are of great importance for a student． Not only do they show our good qualities，but also they can make ourselves enjoy the harmony of school life，in which we can gain a better result of study．（高分句型一）（ 文明行為帶來(lái)的益處）
How can we develop civilized behaviours？The first important thing we should do is to be a student with good scores and a student always ready to help people in need（高分句型二）．Besides，we should keep the school environment clean．Never destroy the plants in our school，such as flowers，trees and grass．Most importantly，we should remember hard working and obeying the school rules make up the most necessary civilized behaviours as a student．（文明行為的具體表現(xiàn) ）
That's all．Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．