Question

【題目】假設你是晨光中學學生Li Jin�？吹叫�園網英文討論區(qū)一位同學發(fā)的帖子，談到復課復學后自己的學習情況。請你用英語給他回帖。

After a super long staycation, I returned to school on May. Studying at home is not as efficient as at school. I have been feeling nervous about the school life and the intense stress from study. I think I am totally left behind. I should have worked hard, but sometimes I just can’t concentrate on what the teacher is saying in the class…

John

1. 表示理解并鼓勵他…

2. 給他提出相關建議（如保持良好心態(tài)；認真上好每一節(jié)課；向老師同學尋求幫助等）

3. 期待他能夠取得進步。

注意：1. 詞數不少于100；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

John,

It’s very normal that you feel stressed and nervous after such a long staycation.

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Li Jin

Answer 1

【答案】John

It’s very normal that you feel stressed and nervous after such a long staycation. I had the same feelings because many changes have been made not only to our schedules but also to our mindset. So try to face it and keep positive.

Here I want to give you some pieces of advice.

First, you should keep a good mood and calm yourself, which helps to lower your stress level. Next, take every lesson seriously. At present, learning is affected but everyone is in the same situation. Don’t think too much , JUST DO IT. You should set up your daily tasks, and improve your concentration by practice. Finally, if you have any problem, try to turn to your classmates and teachers when you get anxious.

I hope it’ll help you and expect your improvement.

Li Jin

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封帖子到校園網上，表達對一位復課后壓力很大的同學的理解和支持。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)將用到一般過去時、現在完成時、一般現在時和一般將來時。

結構：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。

要求：1.表達對該同學的理解并進行鼓勵； 2. 給他提出相關建議（如保持良好心態(tài)；認真上好每一節(jié)課；向老師同學尋求幫助等）；3. 期待他能夠取得進步。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組和句式）

It’s very normal that…、the same feelings、give sb some pieces of advice、keep a good mood、take every lesson seriously、turn to。

第三步：連詞成句

1. It’s very normal that you feel stressed and nervous after such a long staycation.

2. I had the same feelings.

3. Here I want to give you some pieces of advice.

4. You should keep a good mood and calm yourself.

5. You should take every lesson seriously.

6. You should try to turn to your classmates and teachers when you get anxious.

第四步：連句成篇（句與句之間使用銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡。

第五步：潤色修改：運用主從復合句給部分句子添加適當細節(jié)，使行文更連貫;對用詞重復的句子進行句式轉換，使行文更簡潔。