假設(shè)你是李華，最近你的美國(guó)筆友杰里（Jerry）來(lái)信說(shuō)他的一個(gè)室友經(jīng)常聽(tīng)音樂(lè)到深夜，導(dǎo)致他無(wú)法入睡。他很苦惱不知該如何解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封回信，提出你的建議。

注意：詞數(shù)120左右；

One possible version：

 

 

 

 

Dear Jerry,

Thank you for your trust in me. I understand you are feeling upset now. I’d like to offer you some advice.

Firstly, I suggest you have a heart-to-heart talk with your roommate who stays up late at night. You should let him know that you are seriously affected by his music. Secondly, you should tell him the importance of getting enough sleep since a good rest can make both of you energetic in the day time. If you’re too shy to talk with him, you can tell him about your feelings by writing him a letter. I believe he will understand you and give up the bad habit.

I hope you’ll find these ideas useful.

【解析】這是一篇寫(xiě)信的書(shū)面表達(dá)，根據(jù)信中的困擾對(duì)Jerry表示安慰和理解，并給出相應(yīng)的合理建議。所以考生在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要圍繞信中的問(wèn)題來(lái)提出合理化的建議。題目沒(méi)有任何提示，所以此文的得分之高低在于考生提出建議的合理與精辟以及其語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的兩點(diǎn)是否突出。無(wú)論是寫(xiě)信還是寫(xiě)電子郵件，都要注意其格式的規(guī)范性。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：

本文采用了經(jīng)典的三段論式的寫(xiě)法，條例清晰。開(kāi)篇對(duì)Jerry的信任表示感謝，并引出建議，最后又對(duì)Jerry報(bào)以祝福，符合寫(xiě)信的格式。第二段中用firstly,secondly兩個(gè)副詞作為連接詞使得文章連貫。句式的多樣性也使得本文增添了幾分色彩，例如I suggest you have a heart-to-heart talk with your roommate who stays up late at night賓語(yǔ)從句與定語(yǔ)從句構(gòu)成了一個(gè)復(fù)合句，you are seriously affected by his music.與you can tell him about your feelings by writing him a letter.被動(dòng)句與主動(dòng)句的交替，if條件句的使用。詞性詞義的靈活應(yīng)用亦是可圈可點(diǎn)，例如用importance替換了常見(jiàn)的important，用since代替了常用的because。

考點(diǎn)：書(shū)信表達(dá)

 

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