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【題目】假如你叫李津，在報(bào)紙上看到一幅成語(yǔ)漫畫(huà)，很有感觸。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)筆友寫(xiě)一封郵件，描述這幅漫畫(huà)并談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿?/span>

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于100，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Tony,

I saw an interesting carton in a newspaper.

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Yours

Li Jin

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

I saw an interesting carton in a newspaper. I was very impressed. Now, I'd like to share this idiom story with you and my thoughts.

This fable mainly tells the story of the followers to drink wine. They competed to draw snakes. A follower, who was proud of being faster than the others, added feet to the snake. In the end, he failed to drink and was laughed at by another follower.

Gilding the lily tells people that doing extra things is not good for them, and doing too much is bad for them. Therefore, we should grasp the truth of the scale and timing, because truth and fallacy are often only one step apart. I also hope you will be inspired by it.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封信件；假如你叫李津，在報(bào)紙上看到一幅成語(yǔ)漫畫(huà)，很有感觸；請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)筆友寫(xiě)一封郵件，描述這幅漫畫(huà)并談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿８鶕?jù)漫畫(huà)可知，本篇要介紹中國(guó)成語(yǔ)故事“畫(huà)蛇添足”，介紹傳統(tǒng)故事，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般故去時(shí)。人稱使用第三人稱。

第2步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：be very impressed（很有感觸），idiom story（成語(yǔ)故事），fable（寓言），Gilding the lily（畫(huà)蛇添足）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。