Question

第二卷（共 35 分）
第四部分 寫作（共兩節(jié)．滿分35分）
第一節(jié)短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。  
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Our class hold a class meeting to discuss whether it is good or not for middle school students to surf the Internet. As the development of society, computers that are used widely nowadays. Surfing the Internet is only a good way we can get more informations but it is convenient to communicate with others. Therefore, not all the students agree to this opinion. They think it is harmful to spend much time play computer games. It is really the waste of time and money, that has a bad effect on us. In my opinion we should limit our time of surfing the Internet like a middle school student.

Answer 1

Our class hold a class meeting to discuss whether it is good or not for middle school students to
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surf the Internet. As the development of society, computers that are used widely nowadays.
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Surfing the Internet is only a good way we can get more informations but it is convenient to
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communicate with others. Therefore, not all the students agree to this opinion. They think it is
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harmful to spend much time play computer games. It is really the waste of time and money, that
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has a bad effect on us. In my opinion we should limit our time of surfing the Internet like a middle
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school student.

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