20．假定你是李華，上個(gè)月你從外教Mr．Brown那里借了一本海明威（Hemingway）的小說《老人與�！罚═he  Old Man and the Sea），但不慎將書丟失．為此請(qǐng)你給Mr．Brown寫一封道歉信．信的內(nèi)容包括：
（1）道歉
（2）說明丟失原因
（3）提出補(bǔ)救措施
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Mr．Brown，
I'm writing this letter to make an apology to you forlosing the book"The old man and the sea"by Hemingway you lent to me last month．（高分句型一）
I really appreciate the novel．However，I didn't keep it properly as promised．I was so careless that I left it to the city public library．（高分句型二）I've been looking for it，but in vain．Feeling awfully sorry，I've bought a new one to make up for my fault．I hope you can forgive me for my carelessness．What's more．I've heard that you are interested in Chinese Tang poems，so I've also bought a"300 Tang Poems"for any inconvenience it may cause to you．（高分句型三）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息上個(gè)月你從外教Mr．Brown那里借了一本海明威（Hemingway）的小說《老人與�！罚═he  Old Man and the Sea），但不慎將書丟失．為此請(qǐng)你給Mr．Brown寫一封道歉信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：（1）道歉（2）說明丟失原因
（3）提出補(bǔ)救措施 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài) 4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：make an apology to向…道歉；However然而；look for尋找； in vain徒勞的；make up for彌補(bǔ)；What's more而且；
I'm writing this letter to make an apology to you for losing the book"The old man and the sea"by Hemingway you lent to me last month．（高分句型一）
However，I didn't keep it properly as promised．I was so careless that I left it to the city public library．（高分句型二）
What's more．I've heard that you are interested in Chinese Tang poems，so I've also bought a"300 Tang Poems"for any inconvenience it may cause to you．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Brown，
     I'm writing this letter to make an apology to you for losing the book"The old man and the sea"by Hemingway you lent to me last month．（高分句型一）
     I really appreciate the novel．However，I didn't keep it properly as promised．I was so careless that I left it to the city public library．（高分句型二）I've been looking for it，but in vain．Feeling awfully sorry，I've bought a new one to make up for my fault．I hope you can forgive me for my carelessness．What's more．I've heard that you are interested in Chinese Tang poems，so I've also bought a"300 Tang Poems"for any inconvenience it may cause to you．（高分句型三）
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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