Question

In an English competition, you are required to write an article according to the picture below. Look at the picture carefully and write down how you understand it.

注意：

1、描述圖片主要內(nèi)容，談?wù)勀愕睦斫饧翱捶ǎ?/p>

2、詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)；

3、文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Possible version:

As we can see from the picture，two people，father and son，are talking to each other．The

boy, standing on the ground, is looking up at his father, slightly scared, while his father, seated high on a big Chinese character “fu”, meaning “father” , is shouting to his son．

Such a situation seems fairly common in our society. When talking to each other, father and

son are not in equal positions. Fathers simply tell their sons what to do rather than listen patiently．Therefore, sons will have few chances to share their own ideas or open up to their fathers．They often look up to their fathers with respect, fearing that they might not live up to fathers’ expectations.

1 hope our parents will listen to us more instead of just giving us orders.

【解析】考察看圖作文

【寫作指導(dǎo)】

本文屬于看圖作文。主題是父母親和孩子的交流處于一個(gè)不平等的狀態(tài)，父母親的位置過高，不能設(shè)身處地為孩子考慮。導(dǎo)致父母親和孩子之間的交流不夠充分。所以本文屬于議論文，使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)。寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。

【一句多譯】

1.當(dāng)他們相互交流的時(shí)候，父親和孩子不在平等的位置上。

①When talking to each other, father and son are not in equal positions.

②Talking to each other, father and son are not in equal positions.

2.他們總是尊敬自己的父親，唯恐他們達(dá)不到父親的要求。

①They often look up to their fathers with respect, fearing that they might not live up to fathers’ expectations.

②They often look up to their fathers with respect , fearing that they might not meet fathers’ demands.