Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1).每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2).只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Country music is one of the most popular kinds of music in the United states today because it is about simple but strong human feeling and events---love, sadness, good times, and bad times. It tells real—life stories and sound the way people really talk.
Country music, sometimes is called country-western, comes by two kinds of music. One is traditional music from the eastern United States. The other is traditional cowboy music from the west. The singers usual play guitars. At first it is popular mostly in the South. And during World War II, thousands of Southerners went to the Northeast and Midwest to work in the factories. They took their music with them. Soldiers which were from the rest of the country went to army camps in the South learned country music. Thus they became popular all over country.

Answer 1

【答案】①feeling→feelings ； ②sound→sounds； ③sometimes后面的is 去掉 ； ④comes后面的by→from ； ⑤usual→usually ； ⑥is →was ； ⑦And →But ； ⑧which→who/that； ⑨t(yī)hey→it ； ⑩over后加the
【解析】本文是一篇說明文，介紹了鄉(xiāng)村音樂。
①考查名詞。feeling是“知覺”，feelings是“感情”。根據(jù)后面的解釋“it is about simple but strong human feelings and events---love, sadness, good times, and bad times.” 它是關(guān)于簡(jiǎn)單但強(qiáng)烈的人類情感和事件——愛，悲傷，美好時(shí)光和壞時(shí)光。由句意可知在本句中表達(dá)的是“情感（feelings）”而非“知覺，感覺”故把feeling改為feelings
②考查主謂一致。句意：它講述現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中的故事，表達(dá)人們的談話方式。分析句子It tells real—life stories and sound the way people really talk可知，It 是sound的邏輯主語，謂語動(dòng)詞要用單數(shù)，故把sound改成sounds。
③考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句意：鄉(xiāng)村音樂有時(shí)被稱為country-western，它來源于兩種音樂。分析句子Country music, sometimes is called country-western, comes from two kinds of music.可知Country music的謂語動(dòng)詞是comes。而,sometimes is called country-western是它的定語，如果有is,可改為which sometimes is called country-western，二者為被動(dòng)關(guān)系。因此改為非謂語為sometimes called country-western，所以要去掉is。
④c考查介詞。句意:…來自兩種音樂.分析句意可知為“來自（come from）”,come by為“從旁走過,得到,獲得”.因此要把by改為from..
⑤考查副詞。usual在句子中作狀語，修飾play，修飾動(dòng)詞的要用副詞，而usual 為形容詞，故usual改為usually。
⑥考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：起初它在南部很流行。由此可知最初表示這件事發(fā)生在過去 ，因此謂語動(dòng)詞要用過去時(shí)，因此要把is改為was。
⑦考查連詞。句意：起初它在南部很流行。但是第二次世界大戰(zhàn)期間，成千上萬的南方人到東北部和中西部去工廠干活。根據(jù)句意可知前后兩句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而非并列關(guān)系。因此要把And 改為But。
⑧考查定語從句。分析句子Soldiers which were from the rest of the country went to army camps in the South learned country musi可知，soldiers被一個(gè)定語從句修飾，soldiers（士兵），指人，在定語從句中作主語，要用who/that。故把which改為who或that.
⑨考查代詞。根據(jù)上文所說的是country music鄉(xiāng)村音樂，這是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用they,要用it，因此they改為it。
⑩考查固定搭配。句意：因此鄉(xiāng)村音樂在全國各地都很受歡迎。all over the country 為固定搭配，“遍及全國”，因此要在all over 后加the。