10.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處錯誤,每句中最多有兩處.錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(Λ),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.

Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play.All over the world men and woman,boys and girls enjoy sports.Since long ago,many adults and children called their friends together to spend hours,even days play games.One of the reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to live happy.In another words,they help to keep people strong.When people play games,they move a lot.That is how sports are good activities for their health.Having fun with their friends make them delighted.Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play.In big American cities,thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.

分析 每個人都喜歡玩.世界上的男女老少都喜歡運(yùn)動,因?yàn)檫\(yùn)動不但可以讓人開心還可以增強(qiáng)體質(zhì).人們也喜歡看別人運(yùn)動,比如看球賽.

解答 Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play.All over the world men and woman,boys and girls enjoy sports.Since long ago,many adults and children∧called their friends together to spend hours,even days play games.One of the reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to live happy.In another words,they help to keep people strong.When people play games,they move a lot.That is how sports are good activities for their health.Having fun with their friends make them delighted.Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play.In big American cities,thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.
詳解:
1.a(chǎn)nd改為but;連詞錯誤.句意表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折,不是并列.  
2.woman改為women;名詞錯誤.句意表達(dá)的是泛指,要用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式.  
3.加have;時態(tài)錯誤.句中since引導(dǎo)時間狀語,表示從過去到現(xiàn)在,是現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)的用法;主語是復(fù)數(shù),要添加助動詞have來構(gòu)成.  
4.play改為playing;動詞搭配錯誤.spend some time(in)doing sth花時間做某事.  
5.happy改為happily;副詞錯誤.句中happy修飾動詞live,要用副詞形式.  
6.a(chǎn)nother改為other;短語搭配錯誤.in other words換句話說,固定短語.  
7.how改為why;連詞錯誤.句意表達(dá)的是原因,不是方式.  
8.make改為makes;主謂一致錯誤.句中是動名詞短語作主語,謂語動詞要用單數(shù).  
9.去掉the;冠詞錯誤.句中others表示泛指,不用定冠詞.   
10.sell改為buy;邏輯錯誤.句意表達(dá)的是成千上萬的人買票看球賽.

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識.?嫉闹R點(diǎn)有:名詞(單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤),動詞(時態(tài),語態(tài),搭配,轉(zhuǎn)換),代詞(指代錯誤),形容詞和副詞(轉(zhuǎn)換,比較等級),連詞(and,but,or)等.偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤,如本來用her,卻用了his等等.解題是要注意:以句子為單位,以動詞為中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤;找錯誤要以動詞為主,動詞或與動詞有關(guān)的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分.

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