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圣誕節(jié)來臨，你班要為國際交流學(xué)生Jim舉辦一次有意義的圣誕party。請你籌劃一下需要做哪些準(zhǔn)備？例如，邀請哪些人參加、準(zhǔn)備什么東西、如何裝飾、請哪些人幫忙、如何安排Jim等等�？梢院喪隼碛�。
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What should you do if we want to have a successful Christmas party for Jim?   
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  

Answer 1

What should you do if we want to have a successful Christmas party for Jim?
First, we will decide who will be our guests, for example, the teachers, all the classmates and Jim’s native friends if possible. Then we should make cards to invite them to come in advance. Then, arrange someone to make the lists of party food and party drinks and prepare them, for we won’t just sit there, talking. Later, some interesting things, for example, movies or songs, must be prepared depending on the taste of our guests. We can also decorate our room with many beautiful things, such as a big Christmas tree with colorful lights, to make Jim feel at home. All the class will help decorate the tree ourselves, it would just be fun. And last, we will arrange Jim to act as Father Christmas, it is certain to be the highlight of the party.

本文是一篇給材料作文，或者說半開放作文，寫一份計劃書，你班要為國際交流學(xué)生Jim舉辦一次有意義的圣誕party。請你籌劃一下需要做哪些準(zhǔn)備？要點已經(jīng)給出邀請哪些人參加、準(zhǔn)備什么東西、如何裝飾、請哪些人幫忙、如何安排Jim等等。還要簡述理由。
在行文中，我們可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。范文中就使用了合理的連詞和較高級的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增色不少。
【寫作亮點】：we will decide who will be our guests, for example, the teachers, all the classmates and Jim’s native friends if possible.這句話用了省略式，Later, some interesting things, for example, movies or songs, must be prepared depending on the taste of our guests這句話使用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語。同時文章中使用了適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，比如：First,，for example,，such as等，使用文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，渾然一體。