Question

3．請根據(jù)圖片，寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：
1．描述漫畫內(nèi)容；
2．結(jié)合自己或身邊的事例闡述圖中的寓意；
3．簡要發(fā)表自己的觀點．

Answer 1

分析 本篇看圖作文描述了父母對于孩子過高的要求和期望，考生要圍繞這一現(xiàn)象來寫作．可以使用舉例，或者邏輯分析的方法來豐富作文的內(nèi)容．同時考生還要注意的是在寫作過程中所運用的時態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．除此以外，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時學(xué)到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語：
  have high expectations on，對…有很高期待，be willing to do，樂意做，have negative effect on 對…有消極影響．
高分句子：
1．Facing fierce competition in the future，no wonder our parents are very much concerned about us．本句前半句為現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，后半句no wonder 加句子，意為難怪…
2．We will feel hard to breathe and are easy to be frustrated when we feel that we are unable to meet their requirements．本句中含有when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，且從句中又包含that 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．

解答 My View on High Expectations from Parents
     There's such an interesting cartoon．The parents are holding two ends of a rope high above their head．They anxiously urge their kid"Honey，jump over it．Be quick!"This cartoon shows something quite meaningful and serious．（描述畫面）
    In today's China，there are too many parents who have high expectations on their kids and are willing to do everything possible as long as their kids have bright future．Facing fierce competition in the future，no wonder our parents are very much concerned about us．（高分句型）They lay great hope on us and want us to be strong enough to face vavious challenges．We fully understand and respect their feelings．However，if the expectations are high beyond our ability，it is a kind of heavy pressure on us．We will feel hard to breathe and are easy to be frustrated when we feel that we are unable to meet their requirements．（高分句型）As a result，it will have negative effect on our study and life．（分析現(xiàn)象）
    I would like to say to all parents that we are sure to do our utmost and not to let you down through hard working．Please don't give us too much pressure and make us relaxed．We need your encouragement constantly so that we will have more confidence to do things better．（提出呼吁）

點評 半開放性作文留給考生發(fā)揮的空間比較大．一般只提供一個話題或一個圖片，要求考生合理地進行想象．考生在寫作時，需要做到以下幾點：第一、認真審題，把握所有信息．第二、確定體裁，把握行文格式．第三、羅列提綱，思考表達方式．第四、組織語言，展開寫作． 寫作時，運用熟悉的英語詞匯、句型等；要盡量運用多樣化的句式，注意長短句的結(jié)合、簡單句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)合；要注意上下文的銜接，過渡要自然．第五、認真檢查，查漏補缺．