Question

Michael是一名美國(guó)中學(xué)生，在學(xué)校里選修漢語(yǔ)。他利用暑假到中國(guó)進(jìn)修，希望進(jìn)一步了解中國(guó)文化。有一天，他看到下面有關(guān)成語(yǔ)的漫畫，不大明白其中的意思。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)把漫畫所表達(dá)的故事和寓意寫成一篇短文，向他解釋。

注意：
1、詞數(shù)：80—120
2、參考詞匯：撞上bump into；鋤頭 hoe
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   

Answer 1

Once upon a time, there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields every day. One day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lying by the trunk. He picked it up and found that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to himself, “Since it is so easy to get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all daylong?” He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreaming for more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolishness and returned to his fields, he found that all his crops were dead. The story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains by trusting chance and luck. Or, we should not hope to get rewards without hard work.

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給漫畫協(xié)議篇短文，要寫出漫畫所表達(dá)的故事和寓意。寫作時(shí)使用第一人稱，注意不要出現(xiàn)拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)方面的錯(cuò)誤；作文詞數(shù)在80-120之間，不合要求會(huì)扣分。作文必須包含圖示所有要點(diǎn)，盡量使用一些高級(jí)詞匯；正確使用時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了一些重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：定語(yǔ)從句who worked hard in the fields every day；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句while he was ploughing the fields，When he finally realized his foolishness；賓補(bǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)saw a rabbit lying by the trunk；賓語(yǔ)從句found that it was a fat rabbit，The story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞dreaming for more rabbits to come等，語(yǔ)法知識(shí)運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，沒有出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤；
范文使用了較多的短語(yǔ)：picked it up, thought to himself, threw his hoe away, lay by, returned to, wait for等，使作文內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)、生動(dòng)；
范文注意使用Once upon a time, One day, Or等銜接上下文，做到了使作文語(yǔ)意連貫、銜接緊湊。