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11．On he first day of her work，Sally found that a class full of problems was waiting for her．
Sally walked onto the platform，picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard："Rule 1：We are family!"All students stopped to look at her．And she continued with Rule 2，Rule 3…In the following weeks，Sally worked out 10class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom．She patiently explained all the rules to the students and require everyone to follow them．
Surprisingly，Sally was not driven out like the former teachers； instead，she won respect from the students．Over the year，she witnessed gradual change in the class．At the graduation ceremony，just as she expected，she was very proud to stand with a class of care，manners and confidence．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．用約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．用約120個詞就班規(guī)談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）你們班最突出的問題是什么？
（2）針對該問題你會設(shè)計一條什么班規(guī)？
（3）你認(rèn)為班規(guī)會帶來什么影響？
[寫作要求]
1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子．
2．作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本作文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這型作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個人觀點．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時態(tài)一般用一般過去時或一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱一般用第三人稱．重要短語：confronted with（面對），worked out（制定出），earned respect（贏得尊敬），lack of（缺乏），giving rise to（造成，導(dǎo)致），address the issue（處理事情）．
Everyone is minding his or her own business without the slightest attention to the people around，thus giving rise to inefficiency in their study and even putting a limit to the play of their potential．【高分句型】
To address the issue concerned，I would make it a rule that every Friday a project of a certain subject should be assigned by teachers and completed by every study group consisting of four students．【高分句型】

解答 Confronted with the misbehavior of her new class，Sally emphasized the idea of"we are family"and afterwards worked out 10 rules to regulate the students'conduct．Amazingly，she earned respect from her students，all of whom later grew to be confident，considerate and well-behaved．（概括）
       The most obvious problem with our class is lack of interaction or teamwork．Everyone is minding his or her own business without the slightest attention to the people around，thus giving rise to inefficiency in their study and even putting a limit to the play of their potential．（問題）【高分句型】
        To address the issue concerned，I would make it a rule that every Friday a project of a certain subject should be assigned by teachers and completed by every study group consisting of four students．【高分句型】The final presentation on the following Monday will be a result of group work．（班規(guī)）
        From where I stand，this rule will definitely exert a profound and far-reaching effect on students'academic performance．First and foremost，a harmonious but competitive interaction in a group will help everyone's learning．Additionally，we can combine our skills and knowledge as well as motivate each other greater accomplishments．Last but not least，studying in group can share our experiences in solving problems more efficiently．It is for those reasons that I firmly believe that this rule will promote the learning atmosphere and our teamwork spirit．（影響）
        With continuous efforts，our class，a big family，will compose an extraordinary harmonious symphony．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧