【題目】假定你是李華，你的外國朋友Tom想了解一下2019年國慶70周年閱兵時的一些信息，請給他寫一封信。

內(nèi)容包括：1.時間、地點；2.閱兵目的；3.觀看感受。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

提示：the military parade the 70th anniversary

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【答案】Dear Tom,

In your last letter, you asked me for several details about the military parade for China's 70th anniversary. So I am writing to provide you some related information.

It is well-known that this military parade was held on 1st, December, 2019 on Beijing's Tian'anmen Square, in which China's national strength was displayed to the whole world. In addition, the success of this parade strengthened Chinese citizens' confidence for their own country. To be honest, this event was extraordinarily attractive and great. What impressed me most were the soldiers' spirit, the consistency of movements and those advanced weapons. With so powerful a nation as our support, I firmly believe that our common people are bound to live a happy and harmony life.

All the above are my opinions. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信介紹國慶閱兵情況。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表明寫目的：給對方介紹國慶閱兵的相關(guān)信息

2.具體的內(nèi)容：1.時間、地點；2.閱兵目的；3.觀看感受。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

the military parade; on 1st, December, 2019; Beijing's Tian'anmen Square; is displayed to; in addition,; to be honest; the consistency of movements; I firmly believe that.

第三步：連詞成句

In your last letter, you asked me for several details about the military parade for China’s 70th anniversary.

I am writing to provide you some related information.

It is well-known that this military parade is held on 1st, December, 2019 at Beijing's Tian'anmen Square, from which China’s national strength is displayed to the whole world.

the success of this parade strengthen Chinese citizens’ confidence for their own country.

What impressed me most is soldiers’ spirit, the consistency of movements and those advanced weapons.

With so powerful a nation as our support, I firmly believe that our common people are bound to live a happy and harmony life.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改

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